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Mkwawa shujaa's avatar

I loved the dynamic between Samwick and Fendry. The world building also felt natural. I will be reading chapter 3 soon.

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outside orang's avatar

The dialogue in this piece is really good, they're conversation moved at a good clip and the reader is given more information without being 'told' it.

Im curious now why Fendry has to be so sneaky, is it because she's a girl? Or just that as a stable hand she's not allowed to talk to a squadronmaster because of rank?

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