The dialogue in this piece is really good, they're conversation moved at a good clip and the reader is given more information without being 'told' it.
Im curious now why Fendry has to be so sneaky, is it because she's a girl? Or just that as a stable hand she's not allowed to talk to a squadronmaster because of rank?
I loved the dynamic between Samwick and Fendry. The world building also felt natural. I will be reading chapter 3 soon.
The dialogue in this piece is really good, they're conversation moved at a good clip and the reader is given more information without being 'told' it.
Im curious now why Fendry has to be so sneaky, is it because she's a girl? Or just that as a stable hand she's not allowed to talk to a squadronmaster because of rank?
It’s partly a matter of his rank, but also that he’s in the lord’s house where she isn’t usually welcome.